She listens to the gramophone on afternoons too wet to walk,
Recondite! Exactly ! Looked it up and sure enough abstruse, esoteric, obscure!
Love trading emotions and vistas !
Fill your day dear one! This is ours to Be ~
Hope your day is at peace if that’s what you desire.
Appears to be my most sought internal prayer
Yesterday a friend came to my door, persisting, tho my admission was lagging
Being unclothed takes time to wrap full on
the day was long past noon.
Her worry slackened, too many brief words flowing
With eyes anxious surveying disarray throughout
A heavy beribboned golden box rejected unopened
No candy can deliver my heart and soul to peace in this time Compounding daily,
unfilled needs of neighbors, villages, countryside strewn with remnants of hope, promise
I think I’d like you to continue the ‘story’ in this poem. The place, the tone, is set. There’s more activity, possibly waiting for you to uncover.
I think you're right. the poem is not finished.
I am very much a formalist, believing in certain things
regarding the use of language.
You wrote a poem, right there
Recondite! Exactly ! Looked it up and sure enough abstruse, esoteric, obscure!
Love trading emotions and vistas !
Fill your day dear one! This is ours to Be ~
Hope your day is at peace if that’s what you desire.
Appears to be my most sought internal prayer
Yesterday a friend came to my door, persisting, tho my admission was lagging
Being unclothed takes time to wrap full on
the day was long past noon.
Her worry slackened, too many brief words flowing
With eyes anxious surveying disarray throughout
A heavy beribboned golden box rejected unopened
No candy can deliver my heart and soul to peace in this time Compounding daily,
unfilled needs of neighbors, villages, countryside strewn with remnants of hope, promise
I think I’d like you to continue the ‘story’ in this poem. The place, the tone, is set. There’s more activity, possibly waiting for you to uncover.
I think you're right. the poem is not finished.
I am very much a formalist, believing in certain things
regarding the use of language.
You wrote a poem, right there